She has worked so hard on this song and video...I think she is headed in the right direction...I love persian music and pop and disco...so if she incorporates all together than she can make it to the top! yes, when i first heard this song i also thought of Madonna/ABBA beat but Ben is right about being inspired by other artists and ABBA sounds are awesome! Go Shabnam!

Well everyone had different opinion on music, lyrics as well as her dance. The good thing that I found on this page was that, everyone tried very politely to give her an advise on how to improve everything that she does without discouraging her except one under the name Jean, which I don't even think he is Persian. Maybe French?!

This is a professional advise to you Jean from a marketing guy to another, that you don't know what the hell you are talking about, your comments are a true K.A. comment and I can totally see the reason why, her look and figure, but in persian we say " Ingadar Dasaml Nandaz, Cheezi Bethet Nemimase!!!!!!

Shabnam Jan, you need to fid someone who writes lyrics which has a higher education than J.H. and if the audience wants to listen to lyrics with broken hearts, they have Daryoosh, Satar Ebi, etc...

I am looking forward to seeing your next and original creation, best of luck,

Kamran

if you listen to music without picture , you dont feel so Bad ..but clip is a little cheesy ... we must support our female singers more than this, even if their act is not as good as their gold generation.

Hi all, I did like the moves; video is high quality and well directed but the subject is cliche; vocals are weak at best; lyrics are average/not that impressive. Arrangment is good but not special. I'd like to encourage artists to find their own Persian origins and bring Persian POP music home. Be original guys. Its hard work you are doning why not making it original and persian. You need more creative work in the back ground/lyrics/writing videos, songs and arrangements. You are doing a good job on presentation!

Respects,

Hormoz

She is just a good dancer.. that,s it